Today's snippet comes from Aching To Submit. Kyan, the club owner, is using a paddle on Sophie while Michael, her husband, watches her as she takes the punishment. Kyan has become a sort of mentor to Michael - teaching him what his wife needs and wants.
In reality, if your partner isn't naturally inclined to kink, there's definitely a learning curve and it's not always easy for them to understand how much we can take and how much we want to take. In this scene, Michael learns.
It gets pretty hot after this piece but here are my allotted sentences worth… I hope you enjoy.
“Look at her expression, her eyes; her pupils are dilated. Her face is soft. She’s crying softly, but it’s nowhere near too much or even enough at this point.”
Michael nodded in understanding, watching his wife’s face, listening to the sounds she made. Her lips were swollen, her mouth slightly open, her eyes red from crying but soft, just soft.
In reality, if your partner isn't naturally inclined to kink, there's definitely a learning curve and it's not always easy for them to understand how much we can take and how much we want to take. In this scene, Michael learns.
It gets pretty hot after this piece but here are my allotted sentences worth… I hope you enjoy.
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“She can take more than you
think,” Kyan said to Michael, his breath shorter as he continued to spank her
while speaking.“Look at her expression, her eyes; her pupils are dilated. Her face is soft. She’s crying softly, but it’s nowhere near too much or even enough at this point.”
Michael nodded in understanding, watching his wife’s face, listening to the sounds she made. Her lips were swollen, her mouth slightly open, her eyes red from crying but soft, just soft.
30 comments:
I loved this scene, Natasha!
So sexy, so romantic, so sweet.
It had a ton going on!
Great excerpt, Natasha!
:)
Training/mentoring scenes are just the best--sometimes I think it doubles the submissive hotness to have a mediating figure. :D
I'm with Katherine, it is romantic and sexy. Even though Kyan is doing the spanking, Michael is watching her reactions so closely, trying to learn what it is she needs. I like how he fears to go too far and yet still wants to go just as far as Sophie needs.
Psst. . . Natasha. . . turn off the captcha! :D
A great way of learning limits for someone new/unsure......This snippet is hot
I love the instruction and demonstration that Micheal is receiving. I'm sure it is heightening Sophie's feelings and reactions that her husband is watching.
Can't wait to read about Micheal giving his wife what she needs. ~grins~
I so love this Natasha...great job. ;)
Hot and sweet snippet, Natasha.
Lovely scene. I like how both men are concerned for her well being.
Nice scene. There's something about how he teaches that is quite intriguing.
Absolutely fantastic snippet, Natasha. I love how you have an experiences Top teach her husband the signs to look for.
Thank you dear. I loved where the rest of the scene went… :)
Thanks for the note on Capcha! I turned it off - totally did not know. Yes, it does double the submissive hotness. I think you are sort of my twin Emily...
Thanks Tara. I love Michael and Kyan, they're both so tender but unafraid to give Sophie what she needs.
Thank you Alli!
:) He is a quick study...
Thank you Sue.
For me too, there has to be some tenderness.
Thanks John. :)
Thank you Thianna. I think in reality, it would take a pretty confident man to allow this. I love Michael for it.
I'm dying to see what happens next. You've hooked me for sure!
I wish all men could be taught to observe so carefully. Great snippet.
Wonderful description of her face. Easy to picture. Good job!
Very steamy snippet!
Ooh, the teaching how to spank scenario is so hot!! Great snippet!
The dream husband... to be confident enough to allow another man to show him how to please his wife while loving enough to want to give her whatever she needs.
Oh God! I'm beginning to hate Sat Spanks! It makes me get stressed over all the books I haven't had time to read yet! I can't wait to read this!!
Absolutely beautiful snippet, Natasha. Thanks for sharing.
Aw! Somehow this was very sweet, Natasha.
love it!!! I love how patiently Kyan is teaching Michael here
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