Good morning Saturday spankers! The Sci Spanks Anthology has just been published this week containing unique stories from fifteen authors, including yours truly! :) Here are eight sentences from my contribution, A Public Caning:
The guards stepped back and we all had a view of the young
girls bottom spread before us, the pink lips of her sex trembling, her dark
back hole just visible between her cheeks. Foreman, as he was known, the man
who would dole out the punishment, took his place and swung the cane through
the air once, the whippy sound silencing the crowd, calling a cry from the waiting
girl's lips. The bulge in his pants was obvious to any who cared to spare a
glance.
Without ceremony, he raised his arm and the cane hung there
as if frozen in time. I did not breathe a single breath as it whooshed through
the air and made contact with the center of the girl's bottom. She didn't make
a sound at first, no one did. In fact, it was silent for what seemed an
eternity before the stripe began to color and the bent girl made a desperate
noise. I saw Foreman's lips quiver and, as he applied the next strokes, watched
how his cock swelled. I'd not seen many men who enjoyed their work so much as he
did.
13 comments:
Powerfully written. Great job, Natasha!
Yes, very vivid imagery and you make us curious about Foreman and what the poor girl did to deserve a caning.
Describing quivering cheeks and dark back holes... all before lunch! This is why we're friends...
Makes my mouth dry. Great snippet.
Goodness that was intense. I love the line about the foreman's lips quivering. We are left to guess, but I'm sure a smile is not far to come. He does indeed enjoy his work. Wonderful imagery.
Your descriptions are wonderful, so visual. So tense.
I feel as if I am right there with them, like a fly on the wall. Great.
Evocative writing, I'm right there, drinking in the atmosphere. Great snippet
Absolutely amazing! You definitely feel like you are right there. Well Done!!
Just picked it up:) I love that cover. It's worth buying simply for Natasha's smoking hot story alone!
that was awesome, Natasha! I read the whole scene during Sci Spanks, and it was amazing!!!
Congrats!
So descriptive. Wonderful snippet Natasha :)
Very intense! I like it. :)
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