It's that time again...Saturday Spankings! And somehow I remembered to put my post up so I'm celebrating. Today I'm sharing a piece from Protective Custody which is now available for sale! an upcoming book which is in the midsts of being titled, covered and line edited. I remember when I used to be in a rush for these things but these days I'm much more relaxed so I have no release date to share, but I imagine in the coming week or two. I shared a piece of this a week ago for WIP IT UP Wednesday and today I'm sharing eight dirty little sentences along with a pic of Joe Manganiello just because I think he's hot and he's how Aidan looks in my head. I do see a little hair peeking out of his pants I kind of wish I couldn't see but I'm sure he keeps things managed down there...
"You didn't suck me properly
earlier, Skye," he said, slowly pressing into her. "I'd like to see
you suck my cock properly, take it deep into your throat, I'd like to see your
face with my cock stuffed in your mouth, watch you as I come down your throat
and you swallow ever last drop of my cum."
"Aidan…" she was going to
explode.
"Are you ready to kneel before
me and take my cock into your mouth?" he asked, reaching to undo the bonds
at her wrists.
"Yes. Oh, yes…" she said.
"Are you going to swallow my
cum?" he asked, undoing the restraints at her legs.
"Yes, sir."
"And what should we do if you
spill?" he asked, gripping her by her hair and sliding her down onto her
knees.
"Punish me, sir," she
said.
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19 comments:
Great snippet Natasha, very hot and naughty. Thank you for the eye candy too :)
Hugs
Roz
Enjoyed the photo so much, I almost forgot to read the excerpt. LOL. It's a STRONG scene. I like the expression of dominance and submission. Since you're in editing, I'll mention that the repetition bumped me (several cocks, a couple of sucks and cum. One thing I would recommend changing is "Are you going to swallow my cum?" I'd recommend "Are you going to swallow?"
That was so hot and dirty! Loved it! I am going to disagree with Cara though. I think if you cut a cum it should be in the second sentence after "drop". It gives it a naughtier punch in the fourth sentence. I bit my lip reading it in the fourth sentence. Great snippet! Super hot!!
Ohhhh....my! I know I saw Joe and then read...and then he was saying it in his Domly voice... damn!!! So hot.
Holy moly! I'm with Cara. Got sidetracked drooling over the photo for a minute there. Loved the scene. Very hot. Can't wait for this one to come out. You already know your books are on my automatic buy list. :)
Super hot and dirty! My eyes kept going to that photo - he is so hot!!
The first thing I saw was Joe Manganiello...right there, this post was amazing. Great snippet too! :-)
She's an eager beaver!! Sounds like good times
Natasha, my goodness, so wonderfully wicked, but then you are known for wonderfully wicked!!!!
Great snippet, well done!
Thank you and you're welcome!
Thanks Cara, I will re-read the scene.
Re-working!! Glad you liked it.
Thank you Livia!
I know, me too!
:) Thanks.
Every time I hear beaver, you know what I think... ;)
Thanks Maggie - I think you too are in that wonderfully wicked boat with me...
Thanks Lucy.
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