Welcome to the Saturday Spankings Blog Hop! Today I'm sharing an excerpt from Captive, Mine, a romantic suspense co-written with author Trent Evans.
In this scene, Lake has just taken Lily to the bad girl's room and is preparing to punish her...
*Scene is from Lily's POV
The only sound I heard was that of my own heart beating at a frantic pace, my own breathing
loud from inside my chest.
The blindfold was wet, and I thought if he took the tape off my mouth, I’d
vomit, my throat felt so full, like I was going to choke on fear.
Fear.
I couldn’t stop shaking, my body an earthquake, and when I splayed out my hands to cover my
bottom, my fingers brushed his and I pulled them back, adrenaline forcing action from me, forcing me to
cry out from behind the tape and try one more time, just once more, to get away from him, even as I knew
how hopeless, how pathetic the effort was.
“Now, now, Lily,” he said, gripping my thigh hard enough to hurt while his voice maintained a
calm that told me he had a plan, that he’d given this some thought. “You asked for this remember,” he
said, setting what I knew to be the strap I’d seen before he had blindfolded me onto my shoulder. The
leather was so close to my face, I could smell it, and when he began to drag the weight of it slowly down
my back, I did cover my ass with my hands.
“That won’t do at all,” he said.
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11 comments:
Scary anticipation - blindfolded waiting for the strap - yikes!
nicely written, you can feel the calm dominance of Lake, great job!
Everything is better with a blindfold!
Ooh that moment when you know you're going to get exactly what you wanted, yet not sure you still want it. Great scene.
Hi Natasha. I just visited your guest posting over on Liv Honeywell's too. Both of the scenes I've read today bring back the rush of feelings I felt during these scenes. This book was intense! It was no 'naughty girl' spankings. The dynamic between them felt so dangerous. They were both flawed and confused. It was intense watching them and their relationship grow. There were times I hated Lake so it made it that much more powerful when I started rooting for them. Loved the ending. Great job to you and Trent taking things to the edge. I promise to get around to writing my review soon (maybe I should cut/paste this!) ~Livia
I felt the tension. Wow! That was some intense and brilliant writing.
Your writing gets tighter and tighter...wow! Congratulations on your wonderful success.
Anastasia Vitsky
Scary...especially when you asked for it but don't know quite how you're gonna get it.
Oooh, so suspenseful. Wonderful.
Ooh, very intense and intriguing. Well done.
Sorry I am behind here Natasha, fantastic excerpt, love the tension and anticipation. Everything is so enhanced with a blindfold.
Hugs
Roz
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