I don't yet have a cover to share, but soon. I'm trying hard to be patient :) so I'll just give you eight sentences worth. Just a quick set up, this is Megan's first punishment spanking. She is already in the corner dressed only in panties and Jake has just told her to take them down and place her hands at the back of her head...
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He waited while she shot a quick,
worried glance his way. He could see her forcing a deep in breath, probably
telling herself to stay calm, but the next thing she did surprised him. She
turned to face him but didn’t meet his eyes. She shook her head fast once, wrapping
her arms around herself, covering herself. She stayed like that, her gaze at
her feet. He watched as a tear slid down her cheek but she didn’t make a single
sound, didn't try to talk her way out of it. There was no attempt to be playful
or to seduce, no nothing. She just stood there, waiting, almost as if she were
unable to obey.
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Powerful. She seems deeply affected by what is to come.
*Shivers.* This is really emotional. Great snippet
Really captured the emotional impact of the scene.
So glad you're doing a series with these brothers! And yes, very emotional passage.
Very intense. I love passages that put the reader inside the head of the character. Well done.
Gathering her courage, I fould feel her tension.
Interesting snippet, I catch the feeling of her quietness. It does make me want to read more.
Unable to obey? I predict consequences of some sort here. Yes I am going out on a limb with this, boldly predicting ... consequences! Love it N, alpha brothers. Twice the alpha -- I'm so there. Where is the sign-up sheet? Where DAMMIT where?
Paralyzed! Love the emotion in this. I can't wait to read their story. I love these sexy Roarke brothers :)
Aw, poor poppet. I hope he has some compassion (but still spanks her of course!!) :)
Don't know the Roark brothers - although it sounds like I might have to!
Loved Taken By The Beast - don't think I ever told you.
Intriguing. I'm wondering what is gong through her mind, what she is thinking.
Finally!!
I loved Taming Emma, and kept wondering when the other brother was going to get some action! (I read it a while ago, so couldn't remember his name, sorry :) )
You know, I actually thought about this last week, and was going to ask you when you were going to do his story.
LOL, that's a good sign, right?
Great excerpt!
:)
This is really a powerful and complex scene. The set up was short, sweet and spot on. The descriptiveness in the snippet pulls you right in and then leaves you wondering... Why?
Excellent tease here Natasha! I am in Awe and need to know more about Megan.
Sorry I am late to this Natasha. Love this snippet. Poor Megan! Very powerful and I love the emotion. I was holding my breath for her reading this.
Hugs,
Roz
Aw! That had to soften his heart.
what a wonderful snippet, Natasha! I love the attention you give to her body language here :)
That is a powerful snippet, Natasha. I feel for her. I'm not sure what she did wrong, or why Jake is punishing her, but if he loves her he has to question why she is so afraid, especially if this isn't anything new for them.
If I were a Dom, having a sub react like that to one of my orders would make me question whether I should push a little harder, or relent and talk. I'm not one for non-consensual punishments, so I really want to know what Jake plans to do next. Looking forward to reading more.
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